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abhigill

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on: February 23, 2016, 03:13:31 AM
Hi Forum Members,
As per suggestions, I tried to modify it.
Looking forward to the feedback.

Thanks
Abhi
« Last Edit: March 02, 2016, 01:38:20 AM by abhigill »


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Reply #1 on: February 23, 2016, 04:26:29 AM
Hi Abhigill, the values are too close. Lighten the hills in the background to make them recede. Perhaps a few more darks added in the foreground. Also look to your light source and add shadings and shadows where needed.
I think it needs a bit of life added, a little creature or birds....vultures in the sky? Think about it and see what you come up with, a few little sketches may help you decide.  O0

Very nice painting at this point, don't give up on it.  :cheering:    :clap: :clap: :clap:
Cheers, Val

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Reply #2 on: February 23, 2016, 07:57:51 AM
Abhigill,

How nice to see your posting.   Val has given you good suggestions. 

Before adding anything to the painting, I paint it on a small piece of clear plastic (like a piece of sheet protector) and place it over the painting to see how it will look.  Sure saves a lot of trouble if it's not going to look good.

Your tree is really beautiful.

Look forward to seeing the final version.

aloha

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Reply #3 on: February 23, 2016, 01:02:27 PM
Great job Abhi :clap: :clap: :clap:

What I find is missing is life, a bird or two will add that missing life O0


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Reply #4 on: February 23, 2016, 11:14:50 PM
Thanks Val, Mea and Nolan for your valuable suggestions. It means a lot for me.

 I am feeling blessed to have mentors like you.


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Reply #5 on: March 01, 2016, 12:07:29 PM
the forum is here so we can support each other O0


 

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