Nice work. I like the background and the soft fluffy look to the feathers under the back of the wing.
I looked at the other two birds posted and see that the black line of tiny feather on both sides of the eye is more solid than you have it. Maybe that might help make your eye more noticeable.
Maybe a bit more dark on the bottom of the beak to make it more in shadow.
I always like to study how others have done a lesson before I start painting it myself.