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Danielle123

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Reply #15 on: January 27, 2016, 11:26:09 AM
lovely painting  :clap: :clap:   may suggest to add more value (shading) on the right side of the blouse, assuming the light comes from the left side and maybe a bit of hightlight on the top of the head and maybe a bit more on the left.
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lynn p.

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Reply #16 on: January 27, 2016, 04:46:53 PM
I love the style of this portrait! You accomplished your goal with the hair by the way. If you decide to highlight that dark hair, try a blue of the right value rather than gray. Great expression!


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Reply #17 on: January 27, 2016, 06:42:30 PM
Vidar,

This is really good.

Except for the too thick curly bangs in the middle, the rest of the hair look good.

Love the pouty lips!

Bring up the bottom of the eyelids just enough to cover the whites under the eyeball.

I like it!

aloha

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Reply #18 on: January 28, 2016, 12:57:47 AM
 :thankyou: Danielle, Lynn and Mea for commenting.
I will try to do the corrections as you suggests  :)
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Reply #19 on: January 28, 2016, 04:53:28 PM
wow.. you are improving, eyes are much much much better on this one..  but Mea, has the right idea on the bottom lids, so is hair much better, but the hair on forehead is a bit too wide,  and maybe some lighter highlights in hair.. I know others said this already,  :)  but you are sure improving!


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Reply #20 on: February 01, 2016, 06:44:38 AM
Great portraits Vidar  :clap: :clap: :clap: 

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