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Win

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on: October 22, 2015, 11:40:47 AM
Hi
I would appreciate a little feedback on my first attempt on the Berries Exercise,  I am my own worst critic :P

 Just previewed  it seems quite blue, I have probably done something wrong in the way I uploaded it



Thankyou

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Reply #1 on: October 22, 2015, 01:27:37 PM
Win:  You did a really good job for your first drawing.  The berries need a highlight and the leaves under the berries should have a darker shadow to set them under the berries. Kathy
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Reply #2 on: October 22, 2015, 04:21:42 PM
 :thankyou:  KathyKuz  for your feedback,

 The berries would you mean I must highlight a central spot in the lighter area , where the light would be spotlighted on them?  and the shading on the leaves would that be around the berries ? as I imagine you would mean the berries would be creating a shadow on the leaves! 
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Reply #3 on: October 22, 2015, 05:32:10 PM
Win:  Yes that is correct.  Kathy
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Reply #4 on: October 22, 2015, 10:52:55 PM
Nice first attempt. Keep up the good work.
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Reply #5 on: October 22, 2015, 11:56:03 PM
I like it with the blue tint, Win.  The drawing looks good to me.  Keep at it.

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Reply #6 on: October 23, 2015, 02:44:18 PM
 :)   Thank you all for your encouragement. I wish I had more time to draw but I am enjoying the time I do have.

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Reply #7 on: October 26, 2015, 11:49:33 AM
great job Win :clap: :clap: :clap:
Kathy has given the advice O0


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Reply #8 on: October 27, 2015, 09:06:47 AM
 
Thanks Nolan  :)
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Reply #9 on: November 02, 2015, 05:38:13 PM
Just keep at it and you'll get better and better at your drawing skills!  :flowers:  You will really surprise yourself, thanks to teachers like Nolan and Dennis!   :) 
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Reply #10 on: November 03, 2015, 04:22:19 AM
 :clap: :clap: :clap:  Great job so far Win.  Patricia
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