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vasu

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on: August 06, 2015, 09:10:38 AM
Give me your valuable comments

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Reply #1 on: August 06, 2015, 09:46:27 AM
Vasu,  really good rendition of the onion.  The colors you have used are very good.  Only thing I would add is .... Remember where you light source is coming from and remember that anything that goes away from the light gets darker anything moving towards the light gets lighter.  I would therefore darken the part of the onion that is touching the table because there would be less light there.  Hope this helps.
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Reply #2 on: August 06, 2015, 10:41:57 AM
Nice onion, vasu.  Jill gave good advice.

I would add more contrast to the green shoots.

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Reply #3 on: August 06, 2015, 05:59:12 PM
Love the colours but I think you should take the pencil drawing to help you with light and shadows. This would add significantly to the three dimensional effect.
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Reply #4 on: August 06, 2015, 09:13:45 PM
I really like the smooth and shiny onion skin!   :flowers:  I eat the onion way before it sprouts into plant, though!  :)
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Reply #5 on: August 07, 2015, 02:20:43 AM
Thanks to every one i will try that dark shade and contrast to green shoots
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