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Paulaj

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on: January 02, 2015, 04:13:21 PM

A few weeks ago I decided I wanted to sketch my grandchildren. Problem is I could barely do stick figures, so I decided to do the pencil portrait classes.  I did do a brief before sketch and am too embarrassed to post.  Maybe if the "after" turns out good, I will post for a comparison.

Here is my eye submission.  Nose is complete also and I will submit shortly.

Paula
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Reply #1 on: January 02, 2015, 04:15:33 PM

Here is my Nose submission.

Thank you for any feedback.
Paula


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Reply #2 on: January 02, 2015, 04:27:29 PM
Great job Paula  :clap:
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Reply #3 on: January 02, 2015, 06:14:25 PM
Paula j

Your noses look very good to me.

aloha

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Reply #4 on: January 02, 2015, 06:19:14 PM
Paula j,

Gorgeous eye, except just below the middle of the outside edge of the left side of the pupil, it juts out just a tiny bit that makes it not look completely round.

The eye lashes are enviable!!

aloha

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Reply #5 on: January 02, 2015, 06:44:37 PM
Great job Paula, I think that maybe  your pupil is not quite central, otherwise very well done. Great noses too  :clap: :clap:


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Reply #6 on: January 04, 2015, 03:32:36 PM
Thank you Natalie, Mea and Sally

Mea thank you for noticing the pupil non rounding.  I fixed.

Sally, I also think that the pupil is not centered.  I will be much more aware next time :)
Paula


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Reply #7 on: January 05, 2015, 02:49:08 PM
nose and eye have been well shaded Paula, well done :clap: :clap: :clap:

just check the pupil, it doesn't seem to be in the center of the iris O0


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Reply #8 on: January 05, 2015, 03:39:05 PM
Oh, that Nolan, he's so technie.  I see now that I do not know my pupil from my iris.

aloha

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Reply #9 on: January 05, 2015, 06:37:14 PM
Wow Paula, your learning so much
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Reply #10 on: January 07, 2015, 08:58:59 AM
I am learning so much.  This course is amazing  :)
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Reply #11 on: January 07, 2015, 02:35:02 PM
Well done Paula.   :clap:
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Reply #12 on: January 22, 2015, 07:28:37 AM
Still so many posts I've missed!  :D    Great work Paula, look forward to seeing how you make out. You're off to a cracker start.  O0 :clap: :clap: :clap:
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Reply #13 on: January 26, 2015, 04:45:47 AM

Here is my mouth

Getting ready for all the forecast snow here is Northeast PA.  Maybe I will get a snow day and speed up my class progress a little :)
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Reply #14 on: January 26, 2015, 04:52:53 AM
Nicely done Paula, forecasters are saying lots of snow,
so you could be home bound.
Hope you don't lose power  :cold:
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