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Pinuccia

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Reply #30 on: December 27, 2014, 11:54:24 PM
Sharon your painting of the Old Mill is beautiful. The trees the building how you have caught the light just great congrats. :clap: :clap:
Josie


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Reply #31 on: December 28, 2014, 05:17:38 AM
Fine job, Sharon!
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Reply #32 on: December 28, 2014, 07:11:31 AM
Beautifully done Sharron,  i do agree with Nina for the wheel.  All it is is the perspective it should be smaller as it is farther then front part.      :clap: :clap: :clap:
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Reply #33 on: December 28, 2014, 08:58:20 AM
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Reply #34 on: December 28, 2014, 10:52:03 AM

Thanks, everyone - here's my attempt at making the wheel look better!
Cheers,
Sharon


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Reply #35 on: December 28, 2014, 11:55:01 AM
Yup, Sharon, the wonky wheel is better now.

The very bottom of the front/side wall is a tiny bit out of line - not perfectly perpendicular.

Otherwise, it's great.   Just love those tree skeletons!

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Reply #36 on: December 28, 2014, 01:09:40 PM
Great job Sharon :clap:


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Reply #37 on: December 28, 2014, 02:21:59 PM
Thanks mea and Sally. And since this is an old mill it's settled so no perpendicular lines required!!
Cheers,
Sharon


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Reply #38 on: December 28, 2014, 04:58:10 PM
Much better that weel.  O0
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Reply #39 on: December 28, 2014, 11:29:14 PM
Here  is my Old Mill revised. I did a few adjustments .  Need your comments. Thank you Pinuccia.
Josie


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Reply #40 on: December 29, 2014, 12:17:35 AM
[smg id=18983 I do not know if my first photo was posted here so I am sending another of the revised  "The old Mill". Your comments will be greatly  appreciated.  I altered the left hand trees and brought them down to the bridge. The right hand trees brought further in and added some green  on the right hand side. Separated the right hand side brick wall from  the small upper brick wall. I thought I had better stop before I completely spoil the painting. Looking forward to hearing from you.  Ciao  Pinuccia.
Josie


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Reply #41 on: December 29, 2014, 03:00:42 AM
Sharon, your painting is beautiful and your wheel looks perfect now. Wonderful job :smitten:

Pinuccia, I think your revised painting is perfect too! :smitten:


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Reply #42 on: December 29, 2014, 03:49:47 AM
Good job on those revisions, Pinuccia! This is a challenging lesson, isn't it? I'm finishing up mine now, and hope to post it shortly.
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Reply #43 on: December 29, 2014, 06:11:15 AM
very good Pinnucia,  the tree looks in front now.   :clap: :clap:
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Reply #44 on: December 29, 2014, 07:10:18 AM
Nice work ladies  :clap:
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