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Happychappy

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Reply #195 on: April 12, 2015, 03:56:57 AM
 :thankyou:  so much Josie.    Patricia
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Reply #196 on: April 12, 2015, 04:46:15 AM
Patricia you did an excellent on you leaves and flower.   One thing that catches my eye is the hard lines on the petals, i think they are meant  to be shadows onto other petals. You may want to soften them.  Hope this makes sence to you.  It could also be the picture as it shrinks everything.   :flowers:

Fiona excelent  revision of your painting    :flowers:
« Last Edit: April 12, 2015, 04:49:48 AM by Danielle123 »
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Reply #197 on: April 12, 2015, 09:21:20 AM
Beautiful Patricia!
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Reply #198 on: April 12, 2015, 03:35:35 PM
 :thankyou:  Danielle for your observations, I have softened the lines and also tried to dull down the one leaf Mea. 
Thank you for having such keen eyes and helping me to improve my artwork.


 :thankyou:   Zayn for your comments, much appreciated.   




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Reply #199 on: April 12, 2015, 03:38:23 PM
It's a beautiful painting Patricia-I struggled with those leaves as well so I feel your pain!
~Natalie

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Reply #200 on: April 13, 2015, 04:22:20 AM
 :thankyou:  Natalie.  It is comforting to know that I am not the only one who struggles.  However, if things came easy we probably wouldn't appreciate them as much as we do now and besides it is teaching us. 


Patricia 



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Reply #201 on: April 13, 2015, 06:19:06 AM
Patricia, do post your revision, it is always nice to see the end product.
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Reply #202 on: April 13, 2015, 11:38:37 AM
Danielle, I have posted my changes and put it under my original painting but the photograph came out a bit lighter. However, I hope that it looks better.  What I found was that the pencil outline was dark in the original and so erased them all as well.  Let me know if there is an improvement or not or should I do more?  Thanks Danielle.


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Reply #203 on: April 13, 2015, 01:56:23 PM
Excellent flower Patricia, you also worked on the leaves,  O0.   :yippee:
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Reply #204 on: April 13, 2015, 02:00:03 PM
Well done, Patricia - you're edits made a significant difference. This is a beautiful rose!!
Cheers,
Sharon


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Reply #205 on: April 13, 2015, 03:16:47 PM
 :thankyou: :thankyou: So much Danielle and Sharon for your comments/critiques which really help me in improving what I love.  Thank you.    Patricia
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Reply #206 on: April 14, 2015, 01:48:19 AM
I thought I had commented on your painting, Patricia. Excellent :clap: :clap: :clap:  With the fix mentioned by Mea O0
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Reply #207 on: April 14, 2015, 06:44:05 AM
Oh Pat....I missed your rose.  You've been whizzing right along!!  It's lovely. You've done a great job, and after your "tweak", it will be on the wall!!  It's beautiful.     :yippee:
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Reply #208 on: April 14, 2015, 01:27:22 PM
 :thankyou: :thankyou:  Dennis and Retta for your kind comments.  No problem Dennis, I understand how busy you must be having to comment on everyone's work which must be a mammoth task with all the other work you have to do. :sweat:


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Reply #209 on: April 16, 2015, 08:09:03 AM
Patricia nice job.  O0 O0

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