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Reply #90 on: July 17, 2015, 02:19:34 PM
Lovely painting, Juan Carlos :clap: :clap: :clap: You still need to bring out the focal point. The figure is lost in your painting O0
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Reply #91 on: July 17, 2015, 03:14:30 PM
lovely painting, just bring out you people a bit as per Dennis comment.  I would also add a bit more value to see the path in the distance. (very little value just to see the form of the path). i would also add more green of the trees in the black (just so it does not end abruptly) hope this helps   :clap: :clap: :clap:
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Reply #92 on: July 17, 2015, 03:28:12 PM
Well, I hope this version goes as closer to the given advices.

Thank you Dennis for pointing out the focal point!! I guess the person was a bit hidden!!

 :thankyou: Danielle for your important remarks.


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Reply #93 on: July 17, 2015, 03:32:00 PM
 O0 Juan
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Reply #94 on: July 17, 2015, 07:39:41 PM
Juan Carlos,

This version is much better - better contrasts.

You are improving each time!

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Reply #95 on: July 18, 2015, 08:22:12 AM
 :thankyou: Mea.
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Reply #96 on: July 18, 2015, 09:37:43 AM
Wow...the improvements really make a great difference.  Well done, Juan.
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Reply #97 on: July 21, 2015, 05:16:21 PM
Thanks a lot Retta for your encouragement words.
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Reply #98 on: July 21, 2015, 07:43:36 PM
Much better, Juan Carlos :clap: :clap: :clap:
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Reply #99 on: December 02, 2015, 03:18:42 AM
It was maybe not the best lesson to try the first time ever using pastel, but i decided to give it at try.
Working with pastel must be like drawing a painting.
It was very fun to do but I had pigment all over the place in a short time ;D
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Reply #100 on: December 02, 2015, 07:30:47 AM
Vidar,

Pretty good work with the pastels.

I like the luminescent eerieness that this piece has.

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Reply #101 on: December 03, 2015, 12:32:11 AM
 :thankyou: Mea.
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Reply #102 on: December 08, 2015, 11:49:25 AM
The path and the trees very well done. Also, you extended the sky to the left which gives light to the trees in the back. Keep on the good painting. :painting:
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Reply #103 on: December 08, 2015, 11:56:26 PM
:thankyou: Juan- Carlos
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