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brony

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Reply #45 on: March 27, 2014, 03:33:51 PM
 :thankyou: :thankyou:oh yes nolan i see what u mean, i will work on that
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Reply #46 on: March 28, 2014, 01:29:17 AM
brony this is looking so good  :yippee:  a few more tweaks like Nolan has suggested and your there  O0  your daughter is going to be so pleased  :yippee:  can't wait to see the finished portrait  :yippee:
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Reply #47 on: March 30, 2014, 07:13:41 PM

hi all this is my portrait finish. i don,t think the right is right. any feedback will b appreciated. i just let my pencil do the work for her freckles (Kisses from the sun), with very light circles.  not sure if i need to pronounce them or not. ps!!! she is 16 and hates it!!!!. oh teenagers!!!!!
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Reply #48 on: March 30, 2014, 08:48:53 PM
Good resemblance, Brony.

There's something not quite right with the nose, but I'm not sure what.  Maybe if you make a cut-out square and place it over different parts of your drawing and the original, you can see inconsistencies. (Hey, did I just invent a new technique???)

Other than that, I think you have done a wonderful job.

aloha

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Reply #49 on: March 30, 2014, 09:24:26 PM
Hi Brony, I'm not an expert but I think that her teeth are a bit to big and may be the mouth to. But it's still a very nice pencil drawing. :clap: :clap:
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Reply #50 on: March 30, 2014, 10:03:43 PM
Nice work Brony! :clap:  You are going to need shading under the nose and the mouth, look back at your reference picture, without the shading the nose just doesn't end and merges with the area about the upper lip.  Also, change the position of the highlight in one of the eyes so they are exactly the same position, if not it gives a cockeyed look, even that little dot of white can change the way it looks!

Lastly, the hair in the reference photo has some nice dark highlights, there shouldn't be any white paper in the hair mass, it makes it look thin and stringy, your teen will appreciate the make over ;)
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Reply #51 on: March 30, 2014, 11:25:16 PM
 :thankyou: :thankyou: :thankyou: all. i think i have some work to do.!!! i might just  start all over again!!!. i'm not really happy with this yet i feel i have learn't a lot from my portrait drawing,s. so back to the drawing board!!!! :) :) :)
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Reply #52 on: March 31, 2014, 02:10:07 AM
Keep chipping away at it... you are close...  I spent about 6 hours on a pastel portrait today and I know what you mean wanting to just start again, and really, there is nothing wrong with that either, just be very careful when you place your features, and check them often... portrait are tough love I tell ya! O0 :painting:
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Reply #53 on: March 31, 2014, 04:49:26 AM
 :clap: :clap: :clap: Brony, you have done well with your portraits and I would agree with what the others have said. The main thing is that you are learning a lot and most importantly enjoying what you are doing which is what art is all about.  So go for it girl.   Patricia
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Reply #54 on: March 31, 2014, 12:49:00 PM
I agree with the shadow under the nose, that will show the height of the nose O0
The mouth seems okay to me.
The left of her face seems fine to me
The right hand side is missing a shadow - notice how her face is almost "straight" where it meets the hair, yours is rounder on the drawing


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Reply #55 on: April 07, 2014, 07:24:16 PM

this is an update of my oldest daughter nicki.

this is an update on my baby daughter lizzie.

this is tbe beginning of my drawing of my son harry. i am not really sure how i do the guitar string area. has a dark background and the strings on top, so any info and comments of how to, will be greatly appreciated. would also like to know if i have made improvements on my girls :blush: :blush: :blush:. below is the reference on my son that i am working from. Oh!! Nolan where do i go  from on this???  Feel like i am stuck:help: :help: :help:
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Reply #56 on: April 07, 2014, 09:08:39 PM
Brony,

Your children are lucky to have an artist for a dad.  You have done well on their portraits.

aloha

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Reply #57 on: April 07, 2014, 09:27:58 PM
Beautiful portraits Brony!
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Reply #58 on: April 07, 2014, 09:41:13 PM
 :thankyou: :thankyou:
hi mea i am the mother artist, not dad HA Ha!! LOL!! :) :) :). my profile pic really does not tell anyone my agenda!!. all good and thanks for positive feedback
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Reply #59 on: April 07, 2014, 10:24:42 PM
Yikes, I'm embarrassed, Brony.  I should have read your profile.  The kids are lucky to have such a talented mom.

Sorry - just learned a lesson - never presume or assume anything about anyone on PB.

Thanks for being a good sport about it.  Hope your children have grown up with your sense of humor.

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