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Alan Dixon

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on: August 09, 2013, 08:34:32 AM
After losing my Dinning room table studio to house guests for a month or so, I am back with the acrylics.
Although I'm not disappointed in the results here, I look forward to comments on what I could have improved upon.
Alan


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Reply #1 on: August 19, 2013, 05:14:31 PM
Judging from the response I guess there is nothing that can be improved. LOL.
Somehow I can't believe that.
No problem, I'll tuck this in a corner and start something new.
Alan


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Reply #2 on: August 19, 2013, 05:56:57 PM
 :wave: Hi Alan, long time no see. I don't know why this hasn't popped up on my screen before.  ??? Never mind, I can see it now!  8)

The only thing I can say is to perhaps lighten the trees on the far side of the river to give better depth. The values are pretty much the same as the trees on the near side and close foreground.

I like the scene. Well done.  :clap: :clap: :clap:
Cheers, Val

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