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abhigill

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on: July 01, 2013, 08:13:45 AM

I would love to have feedback from all the forum members.

Thanks a lot


jrhall036

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Reply #1 on: July 01, 2013, 11:28:38 AM
I think you have a really good start here, Abhigill, so congratulations!   :congrats: If I may suggest one thing: I think if you could soften some of the hard lines and blend the colors together where they touch each other ever so gently, you're tulip bulbs will pop out with life!

By the way, what type of paper are you using? I can see the texture in your paper. Or perhaps your photo is slightly pixelated?   

Cheers,
Jani


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Reply #2 on: July 01, 2013, 02:18:40 PM
Very nicely done Abhigill. Leans a bit toward the abstract. I like it.  O0 :clap: :clap: :clap:
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njnjgirl

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Reply #3 on: July 01, 2013, 03:03:46 PM
Very pretty, simple and lovely colors.   O0
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Reply #4 on: July 01, 2013, 04:21:53 PM
Lovely. The viewer holds her breath, waiting for them to burst forth into bloom. If you were to do this again, perhaps one of the tulips could be shown more toward full bloom, for additional interest. I like the soft colors which, as Jani suggests, might be blended a bit more into each other.
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abhigill

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Reply #5 on: July 02, 2013, 05:33:21 AM
 Hi  jrhall036

Thanks  for the lovely suggestions.

I used Handmade Rough Watercolour Sheet.


 

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