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ronelle olivier

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on: March 29, 2011, 04:04:07 AM
Hi Nolan and Dennis

Got time today to do the fish and the barn - look forward to your comments!  Ronelle


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Reply #1 on: March 29, 2011, 10:50:15 AM
Hi Ronelle

Very happy with your scumbling, you have drawn an awesome little goldfish. :clap:

To improve, you can add a few more mid tone values in. This will help to show the rounding of the fish even more.
I have done it for you below (and included your original so you can flip between the two to compare)



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Reply #2 on: March 31, 2011, 11:42:49 AM
Ronelle, you are doing a great job. I can see you are really enjoying yourself. I can see the improvement and confidence starting in your work. Keep it up   :clap: :clap:
You are what you THINK about - Napoleon Hill


 

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