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Reply #30 on: February 18, 2013, 06:44:39 AM
 :clap: Very good Bhavna.  Patricia
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Reply #31 on: February 18, 2013, 07:40:24 AM
You're doing great Bhavna  :clap: :clap: .
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Reply #32 on: February 18, 2013, 11:29:03 AM
great shading Bhavna  :clap: :clap: :clap:

I feel you can still darken the darkest areas of the berries themselves some more, this will add extra contrast and really make them stand out  O0


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Reply #33 on: February 19, 2013, 07:32:46 PM
 :thankyou: Nolan for feedback. Here is my modified Berry :)


I also finished my Day 8 lesson today. :D




I also changed my signature, you can see in my Plain drawing lesson. All feedbacks are welcome :flowers:
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Reply #34 on: February 19, 2013, 08:17:21 PM
 :yippee: :yippee: :yippee:
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Reply #35 on: February 19, 2013, 08:32:31 PM
I like your drawings and your new signature  :clap:
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Reply #36 on: February 20, 2013, 02:47:19 AM
 :clap: :clap: Way to go Bhavna!!! Your berries look lushes and I like your rocks!
 
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Reply #37 on: February 20, 2013, 04:18:15 AM
 :clap: :clap:   Bhavna, I like your berries darkened, they show up much nicer and your rocks are perfect.  Good job, you are doing so well.  Fun isn't it?  Patricia
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Reply #38 on: February 20, 2013, 04:50:53 AM
 :thankyou: Sarah, Dude78, Roxy and Patricia.
Roxy I know signature are really heard and I never pay any attention to improve it thats why it looks like kid's signature :2funny: .
It's really great fun doing drawing lessons Patricia.
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Reply #39 on: February 20, 2013, 06:54:13 AM
Bhavna, way to go.  O0 O0
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Reply #40 on: February 20, 2013, 10:25:26 AM
Thanks Nina  :flowers:
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Reply #41 on: February 20, 2013, 01:34:23 PM
berries are much better now Bhavna, lots more depth  :clap: :clap: :clap:
Just soften the line on the bottom right hand berry where the highlight and mid tone meet and you are done there. O0

Then on the rocks try and get more contrast between the planes, especially those looking up and towards you. At this point they are still a little too similar, so darken the planes looking towards you a bit more and you will see the difference O0


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Reply #42 on: February 20, 2013, 06:05:25 PM

Tried to implement Nolan's comment :)


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Reply #43 on: February 21, 2013, 12:23:12 PM
there we go, big improvement  :yippee:


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Reply #44 on: February 21, 2013, 03:33:29 PM
 :yippee: :yippee:  Great improvement Bhavna. These are awesome  :clap: :clap: O0 .
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