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Bill76434

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on: January 08, 2018, 12:49:50 AM
A study of three different horses.
Please critique


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Reply #1 on: January 08, 2018, 07:30:23 AM
Bill,

Color is really good.  Muscular structure is well defined.  Definite feel that they are in motion. 

But, they look like they are having a bad-hair day.  For some reason the hair looks too thick and curly.  I always think of it as thin, straight, and stringy.

Other than the hair (which is just my opinion), they are all fantastic!

aloha

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Reply #2 on: January 09, 2018, 02:39:22 PM
Great motion paintings of these horses.  :clap: :clap:
I think no 2 is a bit out of proportion ie head to body. Also if running not all 4 legs should be be straight and on the ground. Hooves are missing on some.
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Reply #3 on: January 09, 2018, 11:48:46 PM
 :thankyou:  This was an exercise and I think I have learned from your observations
Mea, I tried to make them look "Wild" I'll take a brush to them  :whistle:
Teresa, I take note of proposions. I was trying to cover the hooves with dirt and dust. ;)



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Reply #4 on: January 16, 2018, 05:39:19 AM
 :clap: :clap: :clap:  Bill, it is lovely to see your work and you are doing really well.   Patricia
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Reply #5 on: January 16, 2018, 12:40:17 PM
 :thankyou: Patricia


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Reply #6 on: January 26, 2018, 11:15:51 AM
Love that you’re taking the time to do studies before doing the actual painting! Great muscle definition and “in action” poses. Horse #1 looks like he’s wearing a bad toupee!! Have you tried Dennis’ horse race painting class? Great way to learn to paint moving horses. Bravo on these!!!
Cheers,
Sharon


 

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