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Carrots & Onions

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on: January 06, 2018, 06:56:24 PM

My Lets Draw  course Berries drawing. Its not perfect but I sure learned a lot from doing it. Comments welcome.
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Donnie from Galveston Island, Texas


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Reply #1 on: January 06, 2018, 10:02:09 PM
Carrot,

Nice work on the berries.  You are off to a great start.  Nice highlights on the berries, but could use more darks on the leaves (like in the deepest parts of the veins).

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Reply #2 on: January 07, 2018, 01:11:44 AM
 I was never happy with the veins on my leaves.  After I posted it I had time to actually
read some posts in this forum. I saw one in which Nolan  suggests lay down light graphite on the entire leaf then erase out the highlights then add the darks. I gave myself a mental head slap, my veins would of looked so much more natural.  :thankyou: Carrot
                             
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Reply #3 on: January 07, 2018, 09:30:06 AM
Carrot,

That's what learning is all about!!  Nolan is the "smudge" master.  One of the best lessons I ever learned.

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Reply #4 on: January 07, 2018, 04:04:22 PM
Well done Carro!  You still managed to show some good dimension in the leaves, the extra darks will just enhance it that much more.  :clap: :clap: :clap:
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Reply #5 on: January 07, 2018, 04:14:01 PM
 :clap: :clap: :clap: Carro, you are off to a very good start.  Patricia
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Reply #6 on: January 07, 2018, 04:50:50 PM
you have done a great job Donnie :clap: :clap: :clap:

I especially like the leaves and the cast shadows, they have/give fabulous depth.

I feel that you can still continue to shade the berries to increase the contrast between the highlight and the shadow side O0


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Reply #7 on: January 09, 2018, 06:56:36 PM
Thanks will do.
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