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Bill76434

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on: November 30, 2017, 10:14:41 PM
Encouraged by my Two Swallows lesson I dug out some old photos taken in a most entertaining half hour photography session and came up with this. A little rough with the bird shapes and the colours of the wings didn't quite come up to what I was after. Again I'm learning from every painting I do. I'm very pleased with the background, maybe the best I've done.   


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Reply #1 on: November 30, 2017, 10:52:49 PM
Well done Bill. Great bit of photography there, not easy to catch these scenes. Nice painting as a result.  :clap: :clap: :clap:
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Reply #2 on: December 01, 2017, 07:52:12 AM
Bill

Yes, nice background.  Well blended for a smooth muted look

Great detailing on the wings.

Fledglings are so cute with their open mouths.

I like how you roughed up the white on their bodies to give depth to the feathers.

Even as thin as the wire is, you still gave a sense of texture to it.

My only suggestion is that your darkest darks could be a bit darker to make everything pop a little more.  You will hear us say that a lot - the darks are so important.  Ex. at the deepest part of the little birds mouths; in that hollow of the mother bird's tail; here and there in the wing details.

You are well on your way!

aloha

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Reply #3 on: December 01, 2017, 05:15:43 PM
 :clap: :clap: :clap:  Beautiful background Bill and you can be well pleased with the entire painting. Lovely to view.   Patricia
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Bill76434

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Reply #4 on: December 01, 2017, 05:30:31 PM
Thanks Val, Patricia and Mea. I will do something with the dark's as suggested.


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Reply #5 on: December 01, 2017, 11:05:05 PM
well done  :clap: :clap: :clap:
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Reply #6 on: December 10, 2017, 11:26:08 AM
Bill:  Excellent job on the birds.  The babies look fluffy and hungry.  Like your background.   :clap: :clap:
Kathy


Bill76434

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Reply #7 on: December 10, 2017, 12:51:44 PM
Thanks Kathy for this and your other comments.
Bill


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Reply #8 on: December 10, 2017, 11:09:44 PM
Love these birds Bill. Always wanted to paint birds and babies myself but never gotten roundtuit. Congratulations! :clap:


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Reply #9 on: December 15, 2017, 12:36:12 AM
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You have really caught 'movement'  in your painting, Bill.
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Reply #10 on: December 15, 2017, 05:06:47 PM
 :thankyou:  Linley and Cath, I enjoyed doing this.


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Reply #11 on: December 16, 2017, 03:26:53 AM
Great painting  :clap:
Win


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Reply #12 on: Today at 12:24:26 AM
You are so kind Win


 

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