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robynann

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on: October 22, 2017, 05:06:14 AM
I got everything done but her eyelashes!!! Duh I totally forgot them! will put them in once the paint dries some more. I'm not very good with the Mahl stick. Comments and critiques are welcomed.

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Reply #1 on: October 22, 2017, 06:05:35 AM
I think you need better separation between the hand and her head, eyelashes would also be good!  ;)     ;D       :clap: :clap: :clap:
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Reply #2 on: October 22, 2017, 08:39:01 AM
 :clap: :clap: :clap:  Beautiful painting Robynann and with the few tweaks suggested by Val, it will be even more beautiful.   Patricia
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Reply #3 on: October 28, 2017, 12:43:02 PM
Robynan:  I like your style of portraits.  They look like the  Hi society of the 40's.  One thing bothers me.  The left leg has too big of a shadow making it loose the mid flesh tone and look flat.  Check it out.   :clap: :clap:
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Reply #4 on: October 28, 2017, 10:06:51 PM
Love it :clap: :clap: i do agree about the  leg shadow needs softening as it has too straight an edge
TeresaM
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