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Suma

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on: September 23, 2017, 10:19:53 AM
Hi everyone!  It has been a few weeks since I started the course, I'm going through it slower due to other obligations.  But I'm really enjoying it so far, especially since I had written off the possibility that I could be artistic a long time ago.  :-)  I just finished the berries so I will post all the drawings I have so far, including my first tree, which I am sure will blow your socks off!  ha ha, maybe not in a good way.

I did realize with how tall I made the mountains in my lake scene, that you would expect to see their reflection in the water.  Oops. 

Thanks for your feedback!






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Reply #1 on: September 24, 2017, 12:14:15 PM
:bigwelcome: you are off to a great start Suma.

I really like your drawings so far, especially the shaded ball. :clap: :clap: :clap:

Feedback : add a reflection of the man & boat to the water in order to "anchor" them

Continue to add more contrast to the berries themselves. That will add more depth and dimension to them - just like you have in your shaded ball O0


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Reply #2 on: September 24, 2017, 02:52:20 PM
Thank you for the feedback, Nolan!  I hadn't noticed the difference in contrast between the ball and the berries, but now that you point it out I see exactly what you mean.  Thank you!


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Reply #3 on: September 24, 2017, 03:19:15 PM
Hi, Suma!  What a great start!  Especially your shaded ball.  It looks great.
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Reply #4 on: September 24, 2017, 04:30:07 PM
Welcome to our art world here on Paintbasket, Suma.

You are off to a good start.  You will be amazed at how rapidly you improve with practice.

aloha

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Reply #5 on: September 26, 2017, 06:29:44 AM
 :bigwelcome:       :wave:   Hello Suma! You are going to progress very quickly.... I know these things  ^-^   The shading on your sphere is fabulous! One would never guess you were just beginning. Great pencil work!  O0 :clap: :clap: :clap:

 :heeha: Looking forward to your next piece!
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Reply #6 on: September 27, 2017, 11:48:23 AM
 :clap: :clap: :clap:  Suma, you are doing SO WELL for a beginner.  You certainly seem to have the talent and we are looking forward to seeing your progress.


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