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Gita

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on: September 09, 2017, 02:34:40 PM
This is an old acrylic from 2011 upon which I painted some depth and details again. I really don't know if I have managed to get the depth.
Please do tell me your thoughts about this. Anything to add or make better?  :)
« Last Edit: September 09, 2017, 02:57:15 PM by Gita »
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Reply #1 on: September 09, 2017, 02:55:22 PM
Gita

It wasn't there when I first looked, so I went to get the bbc code to repost for you.  When I came back, there was the goose!  More PB weirdness!

It's cute.  Looks like a maestro leading the orchestra.

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Reply #2 on: September 09, 2017, 02:59:20 PM
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It's cute.  Looks like a maestro leading the orchestra.

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That's funny Mea! :2funny: :2funny:
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Reply #3 on: September 09, 2017, 03:44:30 PM
I love your goose, Gita. He does look like a maestro!  :2funny:
 The only thing that I can think of that might give it more depth would be to create more contrast between the water and sky. Right now the water and sky are really close in color. If you make that horizon more noticeable you might get more depth. Just my thoughts, but wait and see if anyone agrees.  :)
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Reply #4 on: September 09, 2017, 11:48:26 PM
I love him Gita! :yippee:
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Reply #5 on: September 10, 2017, 02:39:46 AM
Thank you, Emma Lee for your suggestion. I shall try to work on this and post again.
Thank you, Tezza!
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Reply #6 on: September 10, 2017, 03:27:44 AM
Fantastic!   :clap: :clap: :clap:   Love the painting.
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Reply #7 on: September 10, 2017, 04:39:52 AM
I particularly like your so relink,  Gita.


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Reply #8 on: September 10, 2017, 06:46:54 AM
Thank you Mysti!
Linley, I don't get it" your so Relink"?
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Reply #9 on: September 10, 2017, 07:03:09 AM
 :clap: :clap: :clap:  Lovely job Gita.   Patricia
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Reply #10 on: September 10, 2017, 09:15:21 AM
 :thankyou:so much Patricia!
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Reply #11 on: September 10, 2017, 09:46:15 AM
Hes lovely Gita, I think the sky sea suggestion will do the trick  :clap:
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Reply #12 on: September 10, 2017, 08:39:08 PM
 :thankyou: Win!
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Reply #13 on: September 11, 2017, 03:13:54 AM
Thanks to Emma Lees suggestion, I corrected the values between the sky and the distant sea. Added two distant flying birds.
And I think the result is a lot better what the depth is considered. Hope you also think the same?

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Reply #14 on: September 11, 2017, 07:02:56 AM
That makes it so much better Gita  O0
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