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Sketchabit

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on: August 14, 2017, 05:44:45 AM
Any comments to improve welcome.  :) still not finished with floor want to make it more rustic .
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Reply #1 on: August 14, 2017, 08:27:08 AM
Diane,

The sketch has a lot of charm.  Love the bed and those cute little chairs.  The little table with the bottles looks so well drawn.

The only thing that bothers me are the pictures on the right wall.  The two top portraits seem to be hanging unnaturally. especially the one on the string.  The string would have to be longer on one side to make it hang like that.

It is really good and shows a lot of thought and work going into it.

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Reply #2 on: August 14, 2017, 09:01:41 AM
Thank you mea and you are exactly right, it's something I overlooked because the string should be slanted and I forgot the shadows around the pictures , I will fix it  :)
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Reply #3 on: August 15, 2017, 05:07:34 PM
Hi, Diane.  This is great.  I find myself drawn to this one.  I love the textures you have throughout.   :clap:  :clap:  :clap: 
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Reply #4 on: August 15, 2017, 10:28:31 PM
Great work with the sketching. I just have a problem with the perspective. No vanishing points were used here.
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Reply #5 on: August 16, 2017, 03:43:16 AM
 :) Thank you mysti vale
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Reply #6 on: August 16, 2017, 03:47:41 AM
 :) Thank you Dennis , yes you are right I didn't use vanishing points I just drew this very free hand and off kilter
Diane


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Reply #7 on: August 19, 2017, 02:26:27 AM
 :heeha: Love this Diane! I rather enjoy the what shall I call it.... abstract distortion?  :confused:   Whatever you call it, I like it.  O0 I'm told I've always been a bit cockeyed, but for what it's worth, I think it's great!  :clap: :clap: :clap:      :yippee:
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Reply #8 on: August 19, 2017, 07:50:38 AM
Thank you val  ;D guess we have something in common , I tend to be drawn to more "off the wall " or out of the norm things  :clap:
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Reply #9 on: August 19, 2017, 08:11:32 AM
I understand completely!  :whistle:    :crazy2:     :2funny:
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Reply #10 on: August 19, 2017, 08:21:10 AM
 ;D
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Reply #11 on: August 19, 2017, 02:40:12 PM
Love the furniture in your little room Diane, your "abstract distortion" (as Val calls it ) of the walls doors and floor reminds me of those mirrors that distort your body shape  :2funny: kind of makes me sea sick  ;D
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Reply #12 on: August 19, 2017, 02:56:11 PM
 ;D yes like the circus fun houses , I love cal"s discriptions  ;D , I should have held off and made it a Halloween house  :clap:
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Reply #13 on: August 19, 2017, 02:57:59 PM
 :thankyou: win I meant val , my auto correct always wants to call her cal  : :D
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Reply #14 on: August 26, 2017, 01:10:35 AM
 :confused:   No, Cal (Calvert) was the old barn cat that used to own me!  :2funny:
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