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Sketchabit

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on: July 27, 2017, 03:55:06 AM
Working on this a while , any comments welcomed  :)
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Reply #1 on: July 27, 2017, 04:53:34 AM
Wonky and all. I love it.  :clap:
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Reply #2 on: July 27, 2017, 05:35:38 AM
Thank you maryna, that's what drew me to it  ;D
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Reply #3 on: July 27, 2017, 08:37:11 AM
 :heeha: Fun sketch Diane! If there is a ramshackle building within a mile, I'll find it! Can't keep me out!  :2funny:

The detailing is nicely done. What I do see is the shadow side of the building and cast shadow could all be a bit darker. Don't be afraid of the darks! They add dimension to your drawing and will have it popping off the page.

Well done.  :clap: :clap: :clap:
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Reply #4 on: July 27, 2017, 09:17:14 AM
Thank you val!  And I was trying to find a name for it but I like ramshackle  ;D suits it - I agree about the shadow and that side of the building I just didn't want to muck it up but now that u have mentioned it , it needs a little spruce up on that side n the rocks on the lighter side have to dark of an outline  :sweat: will fit it up , tks for letting me know  O0
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Reply #5 on: July 27, 2017, 10:36:41 AM
Ditto on Val's dark comment, Diane.

Otherwise, your ramshackle shack is well done.

aloha

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Reply #6 on: July 27, 2017, 11:51:13 AM
 :thankyou: mea I will fix it up n repost soon  :)
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Reply #7 on: July 27, 2017, 12:59:17 PM
 :clap: :clap: :clap:  Very nicely done Diane.   Patricia
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Reply #8 on: July 27, 2017, 01:42:36 PM
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Reply #9 on: July 27, 2017, 02:26:00 PM
Thank you Patricia & Dennis appreciate that !  :)
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Reply #10 on: July 27, 2017, 05:04:56 PM
Is this better?
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