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Title: PNI - Lesson #24 - Meadow Scene
Post by: dennis on October 27, 2014, 10:55:32 PM
 In order for me to easily find and answer queries about this Lesson I will appreciate it if everyone will keep these  to this specific Lesson Posting only. This will also be of benefit to you as well in the future.  Thanks

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Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #24 - Meadow Scene
Post by: Helenty on November 27, 2014, 12:24:40 AM
Well here is my version of Meadow in Pen and Ink , I see the limbs on my pine tree are a little long but not a lot I can do about that now , will certainly take more pains to see I don't do that again.
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #24 - Meadow Scene
Post by: Danielle123 on November 27, 2014, 05:33:16 AM
Very nice Helen,  no worry about the tree they are all different, and that could be a back tree, if it is not already.  :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #24 - Meadow Scene
Post by: Val on November 27, 2014, 06:33:49 AM
Great job Helen, you could try filling in just a few odd branches in between. Should make it look more like it belongs....maybe(?)  ???

 :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #24 - Meadow Scene
Post by: mea hamo pena on November 27, 2014, 07:31:56 AM
Helen,

Nice work.  Pen and ink looks too complicated for me, but you seem to have taken to it well.

See what you mean about the pone tree - another lesson learned.

aloha

mea
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #24 - Meadow Scene
Post by: ncwren on November 27, 2014, 06:35:30 PM
I find landscapes to be the hardest for me in pen and ink. Good job on the rest of your work Helen.
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #24 - Meadow Scene
Post by: dennis on November 27, 2014, 06:40:55 PM
Nice work, Helen :clap: :clap: :clap: Apart from the "limbs" you have captured the essence of the lesson very well. Keep it up O0
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #24 - Meadow Scene
Post by: Danielle123 on February 14, 2015, 01:53:55 PM
Here is my version of the meadow scene 
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #24 - Meadow Scene
Post by: Bellarina on February 14, 2015, 01:57:40 PM
Very nice Danielle  :)
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #24 - Meadow Scene
Post by: dennis on February 14, 2015, 03:24:39 PM
Great, Danielle. You captured the atmosphere very well :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #24 - Meadow Scene
Post by: Danielle123 on February 14, 2015, 06:39:14 PM
 :thankyou: Robin and Dennis for the encouragement .
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #24 - Meadow Scene
Post by: Lisafromoto on February 14, 2015, 08:20:53 PM
 :clap: like that Danielle, well done
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #24 - Meadow Scene
Post by: mea hamo pena on February 14, 2015, 09:31:49 PM
Good work, Danielle.  Animals look well drawn.  Trees on the left are really good.  Small bushes look good.

But, the two big tree trunks on the right both have odd shapes (even though they have great leaves).  Is that how they look in real life?   One looks like a girl with a shapely figure and the other looks pregnant.

aloha

mea
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #24 - Meadow Scene
Post by: Bellarina on February 15, 2015, 07:04:46 AM
I haven't done the class Mea, but perhaps the right trees have vines growing up them.  :-\
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #24 - Meadow Scene
Post by: ncwren on February 15, 2015, 03:43:13 PM
Very fresh Danielle!  :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #24 - Meadow Scene
Post by: Danielle123 on February 16, 2015, 12:11:09 PM
 :thankyou: Mea for the comment you are so  :2funny:  The tree trunk have some vines on it like Robin said. The do look kind of funny.

 :thankyou: Robin  and Natalie for you encouragement
 :hug:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #24 - Meadow Scene
Post by: Aniz Oniro on December 04, 2016, 10:26:02 AM
Helen and Danielle you did nice work :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #24 - Meadow Scene
Post by: Aniz Oniro on December 04, 2016, 10:27:27 AM
this is  my meadow scene
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #24 - Meadow Scene
Post by: dennis on December 04, 2016, 11:03:50 AM
Very well done, Aniz  :clap: :clap: :clap: The main tree is just too "see-through". Darken up the center section some more. There are lots of leaves and branches blocking the view through the tree O0
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #24 - Meadow Scene
Post by: Aniz Oniro on December 04, 2016, 12:36:45 PM
 :thankyou:Dennis for your commet :flowers:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #24 - Meadow Scene
Post by: mea hamo pena on December 04, 2016, 04:05:59 PM
Lovely meadow scene, Aniz.

I think the tops of the mountains look too outlined.  Maybe you need to add a wider strip of increasing tonal value toward the lines.

I have NO expreience in pen and ink, so I may be all wrong.

aloha

mea
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #24 - Meadow Scene
Post by: Aniz Oniro on December 05, 2016, 11:18:12 AM
 :thankyou:Mea