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Title: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: dennis on June 06, 2014, 01:06:12 PM
In order for me to easily find and answer queries about this Lesson I will appreciate it if everyone will keep these  to this specific Lesson Posting only. This will also be of benefit to you as well in the future.  Thanks
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: Helenty on June 10, 2014, 10:45:17 PM
I have just completed my Ostrich, I know I am doing these out of order but I find I enjoy it more if I do my way.
The drawing is also freehand.
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: Val on June 10, 2014, 11:48:32 PM
 :heeha: Wow Helen!!!!  :heeha:    Super job on the ostrich! The eye is excellent.  O0 :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: Happychappy on June 11, 2014, 03:48:10 AM
 :clap: :clap: :clap: Wow, Helen, a fantastic job on the Ostrich.  As Val mentioned, the eye is just beautifully drawn. Apart from the basic lessons which are the foundation and are teaching the fundamentals, I too, enjoy drawing what takes my fancy and not necessarily in the order in which they are presented.


Patricia
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: ncwren on June 11, 2014, 04:25:20 AM
 :clap:
Those eyelashes~  :smitten:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: Danielle123 on June 11, 2014, 04:46:29 AM
Great drawing Helen, yes the eyes are spectacular. :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: mea hamo pena on June 11, 2014, 07:11:03 AM
Helenty.

Like your ostrich.  He's got attitude.

aloha

mea
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: dennis on June 11, 2014, 09:08:22 AM
Don't ostriches have beautiful eyes? :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: cyril on June 11, 2014, 05:35:52 PM
Well done Helen !!! Superb  work   :clap:  :clap:  :clap:, i agree Ostriches eyes are really beautiful
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: Helenty on June 11, 2014, 08:10:02 PM
 :thankyou: Everyone, really appreciate the feedback, enjoyed doing this fellow and am looking forward to my next project which I think might be the ruins.
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: NHC50 on June 13, 2014, 07:15:18 AM
Way to go Helen.  O0 O0
Nina  :flowers:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: Ray3 on June 28, 2014, 08:24:23 AM
Fantastic job Helen.  Ray
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: jillh on July 03, 2014, 11:08:10 AM
Great stuff Helen. Love the eyes.
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: cyril on August 04, 2014, 07:20:01 AM
my version of Ostrich.

Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: ncwren on August 04, 2014, 08:34:33 AM
Whats not to love?  :smitten:
 :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: mea hamo pena on August 04, 2014, 08:56:33 AM
Cyril,

So cute your ostrich.  Love the eye and the feathers.

aloha

mea
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: dennis on August 04, 2014, 06:39:41 PM
Cyril, a real cheeky ostrich, this one. Well done :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: jillh on August 04, 2014, 06:50:02 PM
Very well done Cyril.   :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: Danielle123 on August 05, 2014, 03:49:38 AM
Love the eye on the ostrich Cyril, beautifull PnI. :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: cyril on August 05, 2014, 07:30:48 AM
 :thankyou: Natalie ,  Mea  , Dennis , Jillh , Danielle  for your lovely comments.
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: Ray3 on September 23, 2014, 11:24:42 AM
I love the Ostrich head

Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: Happychappy on September 23, 2014, 11:34:06 AM
 :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: Cyril and Ray, you have both done a superb job on the Ostrich.  I am so behind in checking out the posts. However, you both did a wonderful job.  Patricia
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: ncwren on September 23, 2014, 12:15:36 PM
Really great work Ray!  :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: dennis on September 23, 2014, 12:22:16 PM
Beautifully drawn, Ray  :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: Ray3 on September 25, 2014, 02:44:07 AM
 :thankyou: Patricia, Natalie and Dennis for your warm encouraging comments   Ray
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: NHC50 on September 27, 2014, 06:57:57 AM
Ray another good one.  O0 O0

Nina  :flowers:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: Ray3 on September 27, 2014, 07:04:42 AM
 :thankyou: Nina
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: Helenty on September 28, 2014, 08:53:21 PM
Wonderful work Cyril and Ray.
 O0
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: Ray3 on September 30, 2014, 06:05:30 AM
 :thankyou: Helen
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: ncwren on December 15, 2014, 10:11:48 AM
I'm going to grieve a little bit with each P&I lesson I finish.
Great lesson Dennis-I really enjoyed hearing about your ostrich farm adventures!  O0
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: mea hamo pena on December 15, 2014, 10:27:41 AM
Natalie,

Cute ostrich.  I think that hairy eyeball staring at me will haunt me forever.  Great features or is it considered fur?  Whatever - it looks great.

aloha

mea
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: ncwren on December 15, 2014, 11:38:13 AM
 :thankyou:
Dennis said it is more like fur.
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: Maryna on February 03, 2015, 07:55:45 PM
My rendition of the Ostrich portrait

Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: mea hamo pena on February 03, 2015, 09:16:18 PM
Maryna,

I like your ostrich.  Cute little critter.  His eye seems more rectangular than round, though.

aloha

mea

Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: jillh on February 03, 2015, 10:24:22 PM
Really well done!
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: dennis on February 03, 2015, 11:42:46 PM
Excellent, Maryna :clap: :clap: :clap:  That straight line at the side of the eye is actually a "wiper" that periodically moisturizes the eye surface similar to a lizard.
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: Bellarina on February 04, 2015, 02:35:25 AM
 :clap: :clap: :clap:
What a fantastic job Maryna
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: Danielle123 on February 04, 2015, 04:43:20 PM
Natalie, Ray, Maryna Wow to you all on your ostrich .  Well done.  :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: Maryna on February 05, 2015, 09:07:56 PM
Thank you for all the kind comments  ;)
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: Val on February 07, 2015, 03:55:21 AM
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Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: Gita on April 03, 2017, 08:59:36 AM
A class a day keeps you healthy and alive! Love the big eyes of the ostrich. All renditions are very good! :D

I activated my old Rotring radiograph pens. Did this one with 0,50. The reason why I could not get the very fine tonal differences is because the 0,3 pen is clogged. I carry this pen with me now together with my drawing book.

This is my rendition. Thank you Dennis again. This class captivated me all through.


Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: mea hamo pena on April 03, 2017, 09:39:48 AM
Gita,

I love your ostrich.  I need to take that class.

aloha

mea
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: Val on April 03, 2017, 04:23:44 PM
Beautiful job on the ostrich!  :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: Steve Weatherwax on April 07, 2017, 04:16:28 PM
 O0 O0 O0
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: Gita on April 07, 2017, 10:26:41 PM
 :thankyou: Steve!
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: dennis on April 08, 2017, 11:12:29 AM
Excellent, Gita  :clap: :clap: :clap: The lower part of the eye has been filled in just a bit too much and you have lost the expression of the ostrich. All is not lost, however. With a tiny brush and some Chinese White or Acrylic White, just tip out some of the dots until you have the eye looking like the one Maryna has done  O0 Also I see you have cross-hatched in the eye instead of just dots.
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: Gita on April 09, 2017, 09:42:22 AM
Thank you so much for the feedback Dennis. I have corrected the eyes with Chinese white. It does make a difference :smiley6600:

Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #17 - Ostrich Portrait
Post by: Val on April 10, 2017, 04:05:37 PM
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