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Title: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: dennis on April 14, 2014, 07:38:45 PM
In order for me to easily find and answer queries about this Lesson I will appreciate it if everyone will keep these  to this specific Lesson Posting only. This will also be of benefit to you as well in the future.  Thanks
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: ncwren on June 04, 2014, 09:06:33 AM
The title should be happy long haired dog!  :)
Difficult lesson for me-had to do it over.  Those eyes and nose are very hard to do.
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: mea hamo pena on June 04, 2014, 09:13:02 AM
Natalie,

I think you made a good effort with your dog pni.  It does look like it was difficult to do.

aloha

mea
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: cyril on June 04, 2014, 10:08:10 AM
Well done Natalieā€¦..   :clap:  :clap: Thats my next lesson...
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: ncwren on June 04, 2014, 10:50:56 AM
  :thankyou: Mea & Cyril
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: dennis on June 04, 2014, 11:54:02 AM
I recognized Wauzi immediately- well done :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: NHC50 on June 04, 2014, 02:39:34 PM
Way to go Natalie.  O0 O0
Nina  :flowers:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Happychappy on June 04, 2014, 03:33:32 PM
 :clap: :clap: :clap:  Great job Natalie.   Patricia
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Danielle123 on June 04, 2014, 04:36:09 PM
An other beautiful pen and ink from you Natalie :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Val on June 04, 2014, 07:06:15 PM
That's a wrap Natalie.  O0   Great job on Wauzi.....Nolan will be pleased as punch when he sees it.  Well done!

 :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: ncwren on June 05, 2014, 10:13:37 AM
Thanks everyone-he is a pleasure to draw with that happy disposition.  O0
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Happychappy on June 06, 2014, 07:44:16 AM
I have jumped some lessons in order to try Wauzi .... as you are all aware, I love drawing animals so here is my rendition.  Comments and critiques are always well received.  Thank you.  Patricia


Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Danielle123 on June 06, 2014, 07:56:01 AM
Well Patricia I think he is superb. :congrats: :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: mea hamo pena on June 06, 2014, 08:16:46 AM
Patricia,

You dog pni is really good.  Love the cross-hatched tongue.  Always wondered what uses cross-hatching would have.

aloha

mea
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Happychappy on June 06, 2014, 10:18:57 AM
 :thankyou: :thankyou:  So much Danielle and Mea for your lovely comments which I really appreciate.  Yes, Mea, I was quite surprised that a tongue could be cross-hatched.  We live and learn.  Patricia
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: ncwren on June 06, 2014, 01:41:51 PM
Wow Patricia you handled the long fur beautifully!  :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Val on June 06, 2014, 01:48:00 PM
Beautifully done Patricia  :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Happychappy on June 06, 2014, 02:24:27 PM
 :thankyou: :thankyou:  Natalie and Val and bless you both for your encouragement.  Patricia
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: dennis on June 06, 2014, 02:29:32 PM
Well done, Patricia. Lovely work :clap: :clap: :clap:
What size pens are you using? I suggest you get some finer ones as well for the more delicate lines.
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Happychappy on June 06, 2014, 02:38:09 PM
 :thankyou:  Dennis for your super comments.  I am using Staedtler 0.1mm, 0.3 mm. 0.5 mm and 0.7 mm pens.  Can't get 0.8 around the area where I live.  Will have to go to the States or up to Toronto area for anything else. Dennis, please let me know what additional sizes I need for I thought that I had all except the 0.8 mm.   Thanks a ton, I'll appreciate that.   Patricia
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: dennis on June 06, 2014, 03:02:31 PM
Patricia those are all OK. Just check that the 0.1 actually gives you a very thin line.
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Happychappy on June 06, 2014, 04:19:52 PM
 :thankyou:  Dennis, will do.   Patricia
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: cyril on June 06, 2014, 09:20:25 PM
Very nice drawing Patricia  :clap:  :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Happychappy on June 07, 2014, 05:10:11 AM
 :thankyou:  Cyril for your lovely comments.




Dennis I checked and my 0.1 does give me a very thin line, perhaps I am unconsciously pressing down too hard?


Patricia 



Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Ray3 on June 07, 2014, 06:29:05 AM
Well Patricia what can I say, it looks very much like you have added another string to your bow it looks like PNI agrees with you your Long Haired Dog is FANTASTIC I am so pleased that you have been able to draw in PNI and you can see that animals are your forte, please keep it up I cannot wait to see more of your drawings especially if you can do the cat on the log   WELL DONE   :clap: :clap: :clap:   Ray
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: cyril on June 08, 2014, 08:54:58 AM

Well my version of Wauzi  done in dip ( mapping ) pen.

Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: dennis on June 08, 2014, 10:02:54 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Cyril :clap: :clap: :clap: You have improved a lot O0
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: ncwren on June 08, 2014, 10:53:01 AM
Cyril he's wonderful!  :clap: You got some great whiskers in as well!
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Val on June 08, 2014, 11:20:36 AM
Gorgeous Cyril !  :heeha: If that drawing had a tail..I could see it wagging! Banner job Cyril, banner job.  O0 :congrats:

                                                          :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: mea hamo pena on June 08, 2014, 11:57:22 AM
Cyril,

Great job on the wauzi dog.  Really good fur.

aloha

mea
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Happychappy on June 08, 2014, 03:55:00 PM
 :thankyou:  So much Ray for your encouraging comments and I must say that I enjoyed drawing in pen and ink and hope to improve with each lesson.




 :clap: :clap: :clap:  Cyril, your long haired dog is just wonderfully done.  My jaw dropped open when I saw your beautiful drawing.  You know a good artist when you see their work for sure.  Great job.




Patricia
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: cyril on June 08, 2014, 07:48:18 PM
 :thankyou: Dennis ,Natalie , Val, Mea  , Patricia  for your lovely comments..  :flowers:

  :thankyou: Dennis for this great class.
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Danielle123 on June 09, 2014, 09:40:02 PM
Beautiful pen n ink dog Cyril. :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: cyril on June 15, 2014, 04:53:27 PM
 :thankyou: Danielle
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: NHC50 on June 15, 2014, 06:30:56 PM
Cyril this is beautiful!!!  :clap: :clap:

Nina  :flowers:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Helenty on July 11, 2014, 11:36:25 PM
Well here is my version of the Long-Haired Dog, I am really enjoying working in pen and ink.
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: mea hamo pena on July 12, 2014, 02:03:21 AM
Helenty

Nice long-haired dog.

aloha

mea
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: ncwren on July 12, 2014, 04:15:07 AM
Very cute Helen-just love those ears!  :smitten:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: dennis on July 12, 2014, 05:10:27 PM
Nice work, Helen :clap: :clap: :clap: You just forgot the glint in the eyes. If you have white acrylic you can add them in with a tiny brush. Even liquid paper will do O0
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Val on July 13, 2014, 02:10:21 AM
Wauzi has got to be the most popular dog on the internet,  :heeha: and rightly so. He's magnificent and you have all done spectacular work in capturing him!  :yippee:   Well done one and all!  :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Helenty on July 13, 2014, 07:52:41 PM
I think this dog was certainly a challenge and we all had to try, wonderful work to all and Thanks.
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: NHC50 on July 14, 2014, 03:06:09 AM
Nice job Helenty.   O0 O0

Nina  :flowers:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: cyril on July 17, 2014, 10:16:59 AM
 Beautiful drawing helen.  :clap:  :clap:  :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Danielle123 on July 17, 2014, 12:34:46 PM
Great pen and ink Helen,   :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: jillh on July 27, 2014, 07:54:46 AM
I did this without benefit of watching the video.  So I think he turned out pretty well.  Will go and view the video and see how it should be done LOL
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: ncwren on July 27, 2014, 07:57:02 AM
Nice work Jill!
 :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: mea hamo pena on July 27, 2014, 09:19:22 AM
Another great work from you, Jill.

aloha

mea
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: jennylynn on July 27, 2014, 11:06:32 AM
really well done jill  :yippee:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: dennis on July 27, 2014, 09:16:17 PM
 :clap: :clap: :clap: Jill.
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: jillh on July 28, 2014, 06:50:20 AM
 :thankyou:Natalie, Mea, Jennylynn and Dennis.
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Danielle123 on July 28, 2014, 03:30:56 PM
An other great PnI Jill.  :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Happychappy on August 01, 2014, 03:12:44 AM
 :clap: :clap: :clap:  Very nice job Helenty.


Jill, you are such a good artist, your dog is superb without following the lesson.   Patricia
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: jillh on August 11, 2014, 12:18:31 PM
Thank you Danielle and Patricia for your kind comments.  I apologise for not thanking you before.  I'm so far behind with the PB threads. 
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: ckutler on August 13, 2014, 06:35:53 PM
How do you decide what to put in the transfer drawing?
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: dennis on August 14, 2014, 02:08:44 AM
ckutler, When I make a template for transferring detail to the master support (paper) I only add just enough detail to help me keep the proportions and certain details in their correct place. 

Many times for my own paintings I don't need a template as I draw freehand directly onto the paper.

In the classes I mostly add a template I as I'm more concerned in teaching the painting techniques as to the actual drawing side -  for this we have the excellent Let's Draw course.

I hope this answers your question.
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Maryna on December 03, 2014, 03:36:59 AM
My rendition of the long-haired dog

Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Danielle123 on December 03, 2014, 07:13:26 AM
Very nice  Maryna.  :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: mea hamo pena on December 03, 2014, 08:59:03 AM
Maryna,

Great long-haired dog.  Happy face!

aloha

mea
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: ncwren on December 03, 2014, 09:12:06 AM
Love it  :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: NHC50 on December 03, 2014, 02:32:49 PM
Good job Maryna.   :yippee: :yippee:

Nina  :flowers:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Val on December 03, 2014, 04:03:04 PM
Good job Maryna, just take another look at the eyes....

 :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Sacgal/Sharon on March 06, 2015, 09:52:14 AM

Wauzi is such a cute dog, Dennis! Thanks for letting us use him as our model...any suggestions to make my rendition better are greatly appreciated!
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: ncwren on March 06, 2015, 09:54:13 AM
Tonal ranges and drawing are great.  :clap:

The fine hairs you have on the right hand side that cross-that would be a nice touch in the rest of the portrait.
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Sacgal/Sharon on March 06, 2015, 10:12:03 AM
I can do that, Natalie - thanks!
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Bellarina on March 06, 2015, 10:36:38 AM
Never saw this class listed.  Outstanding Natalie.  :)
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: dennis on March 06, 2015, 11:09:38 AM
Well done, Sharon :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: jillh on March 06, 2015, 11:52:35 AM
Nicely done! Sharon.
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Sacgal/Sharon on March 06, 2015, 11:58:36 AM
 :thankyou: Robin, Dennis and Jill!
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: mea hamo pena on March 06, 2015, 07:01:32 PM
Nice pen and ink of the dog, Sharon.  You are doing so well with pni.

aloha

mea
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Sacgal/Sharon on March 06, 2015, 07:22:46 PM
Thanks, Mea! I've been posting my PNI on Facebook and tonight someone approached me at an event, said they love my PNI work and want to commission me to paint one of their dog!
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: mea hamo pena on March 06, 2015, 09:02:42 PM
YEAH!!!  Sharon, you are so good at all you do.  Success breeds success.

aloha

mea
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Sacgal/Sharon on March 07, 2015, 06:51:23 AM
Thanks Mea! I told him I need to get a few more PNI lessins under my belt first before taking on a commission but it's something now to strive for!
Title: Dog with long hair in PNI
Post by: Elize Sauer on August 01, 2015, 09:30:31 PM
Early morning ... could not sleep! What a nice way to start a new day!!


 :smitten:
Title: Re: Dog with long hair in PNI
Post by: mea hamo pena on August 01, 2015, 10:54:43 PM
Elize,

Wow, girl, you get better every morning!  The dog looks so happy!  His right eye has more of a "set in" look than the left one.  The left eye looks like it needs another fold or wrinkle to make it look set in better.  Not sure what I am trying to say, but if you take a look, I'm sure you'll get what I mean.  And maybe a bit brighter twinkles in the eyes.

Otherwise, your dog looks so well done.

I'm excited for you - you are progressing so quickly.

aloha

mea
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Elize Sauer on August 02, 2015, 12:51:25 AM
 :coffee: :coffee: :coffee: Oh dear Mea, when I investigated the dog again I saw several "thingies" that suddenly did not seem "right".  I removed the picture to make a few changes!  Watch this space.

Thanks a lot for your advice! 

Xxx
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: mea hamo pena on August 02, 2015, 04:21:41 AM
Good girl, Elize.  I always feel good when I find flaws before others do!

I'll be waiting for the new and improved version.

aloha

mea
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Val on August 02, 2015, 05:17:47 AM
Elize, if possible could you put the original version back? Plus you may find you will get more feedback, also it gives us a way to compare your reworked drawing with the original, and it doesn't leave a hole in the thread.  :)
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Elize Sauer on August 02, 2015, 08:53:40 AM
Hi there Val, here is the original version.  Strange how much mistakes you see when you look the second and the third and the fourth time. 

xxx
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Danielle123 on August 02, 2015, 03:25:32 PM
Well done Elize :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: dennis on August 02, 2015, 08:05:29 PM
Nice and delicate, Elize :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Elize Sauer on August 03, 2015, 12:15:59 AM
Dennis, Thank you so much!  I am busy with another long hair dog...

 
Title: Long hair dog in PNI, no 2
Post by: Elize Sauer on August 03, 2015, 07:05:27 AM
Title: Re: Long hair dog in PNI, no 2
Post by: mea hamo pena on August 03, 2015, 09:54:36 AM
Elize,

Oh, yes, this is better now.  it has more definition.

Keep at it!  You are a rising star.

aloha

mea
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Val on August 04, 2015, 06:06:19 PM
 :heeha: Wonderful fix Elize  O0

Just remember..... If you aren't making mistakes, you aren't doing anything.  ;)
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Sherri on October 24, 2015, 11:23:32 AM
My submission for this lesson


Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: mea hamo pena on October 24, 2015, 11:33:36 AM
Sherri,

Nice work on the dog.  Love the cross-hatched tongue.

aloha

mea
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Sherri on October 24, 2015, 11:52:56 AM
Thanks Mea  Going to try to get back doing some lessons.  Been busy with taking care of my husband and doing some outside shows.

Sherri
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Happychappy on October 24, 2015, 04:16:37 PM
 :clap: :clap: :clap:  Very nicely done Elize and Sherri.    Patricia
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: KathyKuz on October 25, 2015, 12:37:01 PM
Natalie and Patricia:  Nice pen and Ink drawings.  :yippee: :yippee: Kathy
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Sherri on October 25, 2015, 07:50:42 PM
Thanks Patricia.
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: dennis on October 26, 2015, 11:09:02 AM
Sherri, excellent work :clap: :clap: :clap: Just take a look at the eyes again. The pupils are too prominent. Needs some subtle shading.
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Sherri on October 26, 2015, 04:05:47 PM
Those pupils are a little bit weird!!!  Will fix and re-post.  Thanks

Sherri
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Sherri on October 28, 2015, 07:01:21 AM
My updated version.
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: mea hamo pena on October 28, 2015, 08:33:13 AM
Yes, Sherri, nice fix on the eyes.  Glad Dennis spotted that. Nice work overall.

aloha

mea
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: dennis on October 28, 2015, 11:41:39 AM
There you go, Sherri :clap: :clap: :clap:
Title: Re: PNI - Lesson #7 - Long-haired Dog
Post by: Val on November 03, 2015, 11:44:45 AM
Well done Sherri.  :clap: :clap: :clap: