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Pen and Ink Drawing => Pen and Ink Encourager Sessions => Topic started by: Aniz Oniro on November 22, 2016, 11:53:33 AM

Title: Matylda
Post by: Aniz Oniro on November 22, 2016, 11:53:33 AM
My first pen and ink landscape,any comments  :welcome:
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Post by: Kathysutterlin on November 22, 2016, 12:39:23 PM
 :D I love it, Maria  :smitten:
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Post by: Aniz Oniro on November 22, 2016, 02:03:46 PM
 :thankyou:Kathy
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Post by: Steve Weatherwax on November 22, 2016, 02:40:34 PM
Very, very nice!  :clap: :clap: Maybe her butt is a little too black?
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Post by: mea hamo pena on November 22, 2016, 05:53:54 PM
You are off to a good start, Maria.

aloha

mea
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Post by: dennis on November 22, 2016, 11:23:01 PM
Excellent for  a first try  :clap: :clap: :clap: You have a  halo around the dog - you must paint right up against the body O0
Title: Re: Matylda
Post by: Aniz Oniro on November 23, 2016, 03:06:45 AM
 :thankyou:Steve and Mea
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Post by: Aniz Oniro on November 23, 2016, 03:08:42 AM
 :thankyou:Dennis for taking the time to comment this soon i will post it again with corrections :flowers:
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Post by: Happychappy on November 23, 2016, 11:47:37 AM
 :clap: :clap: :clap:  Love it Maria.   Patricia
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Post by: Aniz Oniro on December 04, 2016, 10:09:44 AM
 :thankyou:Patricia
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Post by: Aniz Oniro on December 04, 2016, 10:30:44 AM
After smoll correction
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Post by: mea hamo pena on December 04, 2016, 03:59:42 PM
Aniz

Love the grain on the wood.

The grass above the dog's head looks more like spiked hair.  Maybe if you bring the dark part down to his head as Dennis suggested, it will look better.

aloha

mea
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Post by: Danielle123 on December 04, 2016, 04:25:11 PM
Busy lady, an other nice drawing. Aniz  :clap: :clap: :clap:
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Post by: John Box on December 05, 2016, 12:10:05 PM
This is very enduring, Maria. The expanded view looks so much better than the thumbnail. The thumbnail is deceiving to the eye.  No expert here, but as the doggie is looking into a sunrise or sunset maybe a bit of shadow on the planks behind her.  There is a good feeling to this illustration.  Very nice work with the pen. :)
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Post by: dennis on December 05, 2016, 02:54:06 PM
 :clap: :clap: :clap:
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Post by: Aniz Oniro on December 16, 2016, 02:11:36 PM
 :thankyou:Mea,Danielle,John and Dennis
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Post by: Gita on December 16, 2016, 02:19:52 PM
I like your pen and ink Maria. Looking forward for more.  :clap: :clap:
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Post by: Aniz Oniro on December 16, 2016, 02:24:10 PM
 :thankyou:Gita the same you
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Post by: njnjgirl on January 02, 2017, 06:56:09 AM
Beautiful!
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Post by: Aniz Oniro on May 31, 2017, 12:50:27 PM
 :thankyou:Mary Lou
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Post by: linley.plester on September 29, 2017, 02:25:17 PM
Missed this one earlier. Love the subject.  :clap:
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Post by: Aniz Oniro on November 01, 2017, 12:47:15 PM
Thank you Linley